Friday, June 15, 2018
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Oliver,
ReplyDeleteI really like you post it was very informational and I really like it, especially I liked that you've even put photos. Next time maybe you could make your future post more engaging and much more, livelier per say. But still other than that, good work, keep it up!
ok thank's for being so positive
Deletehi Oliver
ReplyDeleteI like your information it is understanding but what you can work on is more detail.
ok i will try working on more detail next time
DeleteHi Oliver,
ReplyDeleteI really like the pictrues to the subject and the thing is that your writing is to small.
ok i will try doing big writing next time
DeleteIt is very colorful,I like how the pictures ad in and the clock/man is cool too maybe make the words a tiny bit bigger so other people can read it better.
ReplyDeleteok i will do that next time
Deletehi Oliver you did everything right but the writing is too small OK bye..
ReplyDeleteok i will do that next time
Deletehi oliver can you make more next time.
ReplyDeleteyes i will
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ReplyDeletecool work
ReplyDeleteHi oliver you have been doing good work this year do have another one
ReplyDeletei would really like to see it.maybe you could make another one next year.
thank you for the comment
Deleteyou are doing verey good
ReplyDeleteok thank's
DeleteHi Oliver your work is in impressive i like that you made a cat because
ReplyDeletei like cat to.
do you have another one yet because you maybe want to put in a dog
or a fox or deer because it will make it more cooler. and that clock with the man in it when you make another one it maybe can be a metal fusion beyblade so keep it going.
i am waiting for your other if don't want to make it next year maybe you can do it in the holiday.really cool thing that you did.
have a great holiday.By
hi
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