The message is wear a poppy on ANZAC day
the poem made me feel happy
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Hi Oliver, Thanks for posting to your blog. The end of the poem made me feel happy to because it made me think about peace. What part made you feel happy?
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Hi Oliver, the poem is great, it made me think. I agree it did make me feel happy.
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ReplyDeleteHi olver it is ghetto nice job
ReplyDeletecan you do anther on but can you
say it louder but not to loud
because yo might make some
body deff but good job
do a nother one next time.
hi oliver it is me ghetto nice job that you did
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so it can be more intrusting and can you add some
writing so lots of people can see your blog a lot
Nice job.
sup oliver it me aj this blog bost is very good but i didint wathed the video but i still like it ok later
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