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Thursday, August 29, 2019

man on the moon summarising

In reading we are learning to summarise.  We read a newspaper article about the first moon landing in
1969 we had to pick out the words and put then into sentences .


4 comments:

  1. Hi Oliver it is me RJ and I like the man on the moon and I like the way you describe and also write photo of a man on the moon maybe next time you could has some of the writing and never put your face in the Cameron because some people mite try and hack you Bye Oliver

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  3. Hi oliver it is me ghetto and im a student that likes your man on the moon
    it is realy cool so i said that you are good at writing the man on the moon is realy good so this is my best to comment so by the way good job

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  4. Hi Oliver,
    I remeber this last year in inqury that was so fun,
    Rylan

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