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Friday, August 31, 2018

Tsunami Writing


The tsunami hit France when the sky was pitch black. No one knew a tsunami was hitting until... the Eiffel tower was struck and destroyed. The water was little but then the water got really big. It erupted like a volcano of water. The wave terrified everyone. The tsunami blew everything out of its way. Smash!Crash!Bash!

By Oliver




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5 comments:

  1. Mrs Kelsey CliffordSeptember 14, 2018 at 10:49 AM

    Hey Oliver,
    Man that sounds like a disaster! I would be terrified! How can you get away from a Tsunami?

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2018 at 11:19 AM

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2018 at 11:21 AM

    l ran to the hill

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2018 at 11:22 AM

    thank you miss morgon.

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  5. AnonymousMarch 5, 2019 at 9:57 AM

    Hey Oliver! Did the Eiffel tower did get struck and destroyed? If I was in that disaster,I would have drowned to ashes! Amazing blog!

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